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Those Days
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I had everything the day i met you
and now here i am alone
still glad that i met you
still glad that i missed my curfew to kiss you on that day
happy for the years we had
on those days
you meant it when you smiled
on those days
you listened for a while
i lost everything the day you left me
and now here i am alone
im left here wondering what you said
but i cant remember a word that i didnt like
happy for the years we had
on those days
you meant it when you smiled
on those days
you listened for a while
and now here i am alone
still glad that i met you
still glad that i missed my curfew to kiss you on that day
happy for the years we had
on those days
you meant it when you smiled
on those days
you listened for a while
i lost everything the day you left me
and now here i am alone
im left here wondering what you said
but i cant remember a word that i didnt like
happy for the years we had
on those days
you meant it when you smiled
on those days
you listened for a while
Well this is a song I wrote and recorded tonight...my fingers are purple and calloused from playing the guitar part 100 times before i got it right...
just thought i would share it because i haven't submitted in a while..
i don't think it makes a great poem..but its definitely the strongest song i've written as of yet...
sorry that everything ive written lately is about the same thing...but i cant think about much else right now...
just thought i would share it because i haven't submitted in a while..
i don't think it makes a great poem..but its definitely the strongest song i've written as of yet...
sorry that everything ive written lately is about the same thing...but i cant think about much else right now...
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Awww...imma cry now.....(tear falls)...anyways...this is an EXCELLENT piece of work!!!..YAY!!!...its extremely sad and emotional...but thats a good thing....or else it wouldnt go into my faves....GREAT job!!!!!....YAY for you!!!!.....